Life is ** up.

I can really relate to this in the way that I read it literary and not as metafores. It was such a good poem and I know that feeling of "dancing on the edge" both literary(I'm a dancer) and as a metafore...
I especially loved the last line: "Dancing on the edge of darkness, I think I'm going to fall. I look around, no one sees me. No one sees me at all." those were the lines that stroke me the most!
As always, keep up the good work and try to look on the bright sides of life too, hehe

Love Eli

This is the best one of yours that I've read [so far]. Very good :o)