Another great poem! Love it.

~The Cat Eyed Gypsy

Wow, that was a very vivid poem with a lot of emotion poured into it. I can relate to this so much... but it does get better, at least somewhat. Great poem.

Hey, you write poems like mine! That's cool. I enjoyed this poem... it was good. And I understand exactly what you mean with the fake smile and the lying. That's how I live...

Very good, excellent poem, new inspirations to my nexst poem I think but I´m not sure right now but good luck with your poems in the future.

Most excellent. Especially the repetition about lying, because I've been there, too.