I really enjoyed that. That was so sweet.

aw... that was so sweet. it made me cry - not many stories make me cry unless they're REALLY good. yeah... sorry, I would submit a signed review if I wasn't too tired to take the energy of loging in...

awww...so sweet. =] enjoyed the story alot. write more k? =]

:0 wow... u could b the author of a best-seller man... remember 2 inform us if that ever happens k? :)
anyway, i was pretty touched by ur story. it wuz reali sweet n innocent... 2 bad stuffs like this dun happen in reality, where we all live in a dark n shallow world (no offense 2 any1 out dere whu disagrees). Lookin 4ward 2 more stories of urs! b waiting :P

I WANT SHAMAN KING. kuai dian kuai dian.

wOo~ D, u shock me with ur vOcab again... hahaz... hey, really gOod, engrossed me all the way thru manz.. verY nicE, i waN tO seE moRe Of ShAmaN kInG yar? wannA sEe Yoh anD aN nA=) y ur storiex all gOt coupling one? hahaz... i think u could have build up more towards the back lar... but still very niCE!!! bagUs~! SequeL please!!! i reallY likE thiS fic cOz very innOcent and pure clean plOt... ahaha. i like ur application of UtOpia, very desirable.=) verY bliSsful lar.. gambatte, u arE dOin a whOopIn' gOod jOb~

wada: cough cough. what do you mean by 'so this is the final script and nothing more' you mean you're really going to go on hiatus on ff.net? and 'I need cable', duh, who doesnt? but then our time usage doesnt exceed, so cant get cable. so it's still damn slow. and ahem, i shall assume that 'though I don't know how some people can write so fast and WELL' is not talking about us coz we dont write well at all. we've received quite a lot of flames leh, not like you. ALL positive reviews. anyway, on to the review:
damn super man, cook up the lyrics yourself. you want you can actually be a lyrics writer you know? and a lyrics writer doesnt have to compose songs too. and jilyn has nice eyes, 'blue-grey' haha...like a digimon miya likes[ok. worship, idolise, adore, love]. like the way you integrate lyrics into the fics, dont know how to do songfics. and yes! lester! mwahaha! ok, a friend's brother has that name too, and well, sounds like molester [but he's damn cute]. nice, the way you show lester liking jilyn despite their diff in status. but, personally, prefer your angsty fics [yes they are]