|Reviews for Not Unfinished|
| Jade6 9/10/02 . chapter 1
Impressive. It has a really sad feeling to it though. The second stanza was so sad... with the little boy biting his fist... shivers down my spine... what an image!
| Desbaine 9/9/02 . chapter 1
I like it but I don't know why... The objects placed about-the pretentious objects-and the texture that the descriptions give is exactly what I'm looking for and what I think is insanely neat in any work of art.