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| the mouse that roared 2004-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseYou're right. New perspectives are good. I have written and read depressive poetry, and been in both positions, but it is nice to hear a new perspective written down. |
| Damaged 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuse0_0 I am shocked at this talent portrayed in this piece! You have so much of it! I'm so jealous! Wow! This just won a spot of my fav's list! And I know exactly what the person behind the poem feels, trying to move on but being dragged back down ... wow! Keep this up! |
| Ice Dagger 2004-03-31 ch 1, | abuseWow ... another powerful piece. A common topic, yet you hold it to a whole new standard. Very beautiful and eye-opening at parts. |
| strongwind 2003-09-25 ch 1, | abusehi dee this was really great- i really understood it. by the way its frida |
| I'm leaving fictionpress 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good... *grins* |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-06-13 ch 1, | abuseYet another lovely piece. You're good aren;t you? |
| Alana42 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I love it!!! Keep up the great song/poetry writing. |
| eye of the storm 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abuseits the way they don't even try to let you understand that gets to you most. i think a lot of people can relate to this. beautifully written and it definately makes you think |
| JupGrrl 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThe chorus is amazing. it kind of sticks out and hits u in the face before the rest of the song even begins to be absorbed. i can completely identify with it too. u r one talented writer! |
| Starlight Rain 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI absolutley love this! I can completely relate to each and every line, because I have a good friend who tends to indulge herself in wallowing darkness. All my other friends talk about how gorgeous her poetry is, and how hard her life must be, and all that, when I know that it is no more than self-indulging. Why don't the rest of them try to help? Because she's pushed away one too many times? It tears right through you... So, to make a long story short, thank you for writing something which I could never have thought to, nor could many others, and in such a beautiful (using your definition of "beautiful") manner. Something which so many of us feel at this age, but nobody seems to say. Thank you, thank you. ~~Say You'll Remember |
| JazzPizza 2002-10-11 ch 1, | abuseFrom someone who's been on both sides of the story, you expressed this quite well lyrically. And the rhythm was very good- the song had a tune in my head immediately. (I'm sort of a musician so...it happens. Heh.) |
| liscarthan-rae 2002-09-26 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, is it actually made into a song yet? Cause it needs to be! |
| Katterree Fengari 2002-09-26 ch 1, | abuseah..nice |
| Kenske 2002-09-24 ch 1, | abuseNice song! I would love to hear this played out ^_^. So, is it a rock, or slow, or some really weird instrument playing this? I must know! Great song, keep on at it! |
| Jennifer Jolie 2002-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the review. WOW. I haven't read anything like this for AGES. The rhyming was AMAZING. And it stuck to everything too. Not that kind of pop rhyming nowadays that claims that "nice" rhymes with "lie". Oh my gosh. I'm going to the rest of your work, NOW! You TOTALLY make my favourite authors list!!!! P.S. Personally I feel that my science is quite good really... I got 91/100 the last time... 3--* Sunflower? Like that? KAWAII! |