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| saintchris 2003-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseThat was a good poem, and I think you caught my feelings exactly with the lines 'Don't cry for me America Time will come one day for us all Cry for the hate and misunderstanding That made these great towers fall' |
| person 2003-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought your poem was very well written and it flowed together so nicely. I think it would be great as lyrics to a 9/11 tribute song. :) |
| MistrissD 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I love the perspective you took with this one, portrays 9/11 rather well, nicely done |
| Glowing Embers 2002-10-29 ch 1, | abuseWritten well...but so sad :( |
| Carter Tachikawa 2002-09-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I very sure that this is the way a lot of victims felt. It was the worst tragedy ever. Anyway, you write nice poetry. Wish mine was as good. Anyway, nice. ~CT |
| Jennifer Jolie 2002-09-24 ch 1, | abuseJust promise me, America That you’ll remember this tragedy And that you’ll use that sad memory To be always the land of the free OH. MY. GOSH. I wish I could add you to my fav list overandoverandover again. I really do. |
| Star5 2002-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI really loved it. It was beautiful. |
| Chibi Moony 2002-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThis gorgeous! Positively spectacular and emotional. In a way, it's spell-binding, for you can't stop reading this because it's the truth... the one and only truth. A very sad and touching poem. Once again, wonderful job! ~ Moony |
| nny777slavelabor 2002-09-10 ch 1, | abuseoh this story too makes me cry, what happened was so sad i feel for all of them every one. |