Simply: I loved it. :)

I HAD to review you since you reviewed me
had to review this becasuse this is me
I too am frustrated with this site defying me!

Where are the line breaks I carefully constructed?

So, I share your pain.
But ... to REVIEW THIS POEM
I like it, it has a nice flow. It is a whole piece, all the parts work together nicely. I LOVE the questions at the end!

I read somewhere that with the balanced struggle between opposing powers, a third power comes forth.
Also, in old Cambodia (I think) is a wall frieze depicting the good gods on one side of a horizontal pole with the bad ones on the other, and togetehr they walk in a circle and they churn the universe into being and keep it alive.

Cool huh!

[picks up a lighter and starts swaying as she reads]

Why does it make me think of Savage Garden...? My mind's shot again. But - [claps astoundedly] Usually, I see the words 'apocalypse', or 'angel', and immediately I think tack.

But - as always, people manage to prove me wrong!

*very serious* Very touching...almost makes me want to become blind to understand the darkness this poem radiates.