 GypsyMothra 2004-08-05 . chapter 1Nice descriptive piece. I can almost see her! . . . but I've taken my meds so I can't. . . :) |
 christina 2004-04-08 . chapter 1 Your poem is one of the best. You are great, keep writing! |
 Objective Portrait 2004-03-09 . chapter 1Hey. That was awesome! The flow to that was wonderful and you used really nice descriptive words. (Maybe I'm a dork, but I absolutely love the word 'picturesque'.)
Keep it up.
-Amber |
 whatica 2003-10-19 . chapter 1this is really well written for poetry i think... well not any better than mine hehe buts thats selfish so yea anyways i love the descriptions of the moon, the wings, the eyes wow it just works, i can see this dragon and imagine exactly what u have described, its so wonderful!
check out some of my poems/ stories
~whatica |
 Chryssta 2003-03-20 . chapter 1omg... that was so beautiful... (no im not a flake) i simply love dragons. and i love the way u described her. even tho it was short, it was intense. very nicely done. |
 Rockabye 2003-02-13 . chapter 1WOW! That was amazing! It is VERY descriptive, and just stunning-I could TOTALLY see it in my mind, and that is the key to writing well-go you!
Two Fingerz All,
~*Rockabye*~ AKA Heaven Marquin
PS-Please read my story, I would LOVE your opinion on it! |
 Etheral 2002-12-21 . chapter 1Good! I think it's pretty good! |
 twobitsgreaserbabi 2002-12-15 . chapter 1 wow...thats all i can say...wow! it was fantastic. flat out wonderful. ^_^ i hope you'll put up more poetry!
*rocky* |
 Intarille 2002-09-29 . chapter 1Hey, that's cool. I'm not one for poetry (can't write it myself), but that's awesome. |
 The 7 Wonders of Fanfiction 2002-09-21 . chapter 1Very good poem!
:)
Kate |
 Shadowgirl 2002-09-10 . chapter 1I really like the description of the dragon. Nice job! I've also gotten a few things published through poetry.com, but you still own the copyright to your work, it's still yours. Just don't buy anything from them, that's one thing I made sure I didn't do...like I'm gonna pay $600 for a convention. Yeah right! I'll make my own convention! Anyway enough of my ranting, I like the poem! |