Nice descriptive piece. I can almost see her! . . . but I've taken my meds so I can't. . . :)

Your poem is one of the best. You are great, keep writing!

Hey. That was awesome! The flow to that was wonderful and you used really nice descriptive words. (Maybe I'm a dork, but I absolutely love the word 'picturesque'.)
Keep it up.
-Amber

this is really well written for poetry i think... well not any better than mine hehe buts thats selfish so yea anyways i love the descriptions of the moon, the wings, the eyes wow it just works, i can see this dragon and imagine exactly what u have described, its so wonderful!

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whatica

omg... that was so beautiful... (no im not a flake) i simply love dragons. and i love the way u described her. even tho it was short, it was intense. very nicely done.

WOW! That was amazing! It is VERY descriptive, and just stunning-I could TOTALLY see it in my mind, and that is the key to writing well-go you!

Two Fingerz All,

*Rockabye* AKA Heaven Marquin

PS-Please read my story, I would LOVE your opinion on it!

Good! I think it's pretty good!

wow...thats all i can say...wow! it was fantastic. flat out wonderful. _ i hope you'll put up more poetry!

*rocky*

Hey, that's cool. I'm not one for poetry (can't write it myself), but that's awesome.

Very good poem!

:)

Kate

I really like the description of the dragon. Nice job! I've also gotten a few things published through , but you still own the copyright to your work, it's still yours. Just don't buy anything from them, that's one thing I made sure I didn't do...like I'm gonna pay $600 for a convention. Yeah right! I'll make my own convention! Anyway enough of my ranting, I like the poem!