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| UnknownWanderer 2003-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseAs soon as I began to read this I could sense the very image you portray. And that takes real talent. This is excellent work. |
| A Phantom Stranger 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abusethats an unreal poem very very good one of my favs just a little note I was reading your profile and couldnt help notice the spelling mistake 'cogerto ergo sum' is spelt 'cogito ergo sum' |
| NatashaRostof 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHuh, wow. Amazingly written, for one thing, and also...very thought provoking. Awesome! |
| midary 2003-04-10 ch 1, | abuse... ... ... i'm speachless. the words you use and the way you use them are so powerful... i dunno what else to say. |
| The Black Rider 2003-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. There's no other way of putting it. You have a gift of telling stories through poems. Not many people can do that. You should be commended. You are now officially on my Top 10 Author's List (aka my Favorites List). |
| Heart of the Sword (FPNET i... 2003-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm starting to grasp the concept of a scarecrow as a muse. It indeed does stand for something strong. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Wall of Fire 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI really like this piece. It has a simple truth that draws the reader in. Intresting that you put it in the supernatural sectiion. xx zara |
| Thyra 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseWell, this surely drew me in right away, wonderfully scripted and flowing, it just rolls over anf lets you see its whole as you keep reading, and such a moral presented, *moral isn't the best word, but it works* I truely love this piece of tragic lesson... just the atmosphere seems so darkly...warm... maybe I have been reading to much tragedy, maybe I'm just too happy to come across a brilliant writer; in any event, bravo! |
| Familiar Alien 2002-09-16 ch 1, | abuseSorry I didn't comment earlier, I had a bunch of hackers stalkingme that I had to get rid of. (Sigh) Me and my big opionated mouth, may it forever shut-up. Anyways great poem, the topic was great. The moral was better, and the way it was word was absolutly terrific. keep up the good work dude, Jaa Ne. |
| paramour 2002-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it! verry imaginitive! i did not meen to offend in my other review. i thought it was funny but i was psyched up for something more! I LOVE thisn! ...and if i am a pessimistic self-consciously detached **, what does that make you with this poem? just kiding! keep in touch! i like yo style! lol |