greatness, stated so simply yet so entrancing in a way

I like poetry, but I often don't get it - but I get this, kinda - looking forward to reading more of your stuff - this poem is awesome!

Amazing stuff. The beginning in particular really has got a nice flow to it. Love the message of the poem, too.;) Keep writing!

That's a very cool poem. It reminds people that what they think they want, they might not really want. Good job

very good. i love it.

I love it. keep it up