Reviews for Too Late For Love?

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reader 2008-06-27 ch 19, anon.	abuseAw "really ** it up" is SOO undeservedly harsh. I thought the last chapter was rushed, but it was still incredibly cute. I loved it. Thanks so much for sharing your work; I'm going to go check out your other pieces now. :)
CrazyCowgirl101 2008-06-26 ch 11,	abusei like how you characters have converstaions with each other, its really amusing! Anyway, good story i like it.
Lonely Kerl 2008-06-25 ch 10,	abuseaw :) that was one a sweet way to end a chapter. doesn't it just make you want to turn into a puddle on he floor?
I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-28 ch 18,	abusecliche but awsome anyways! xx
atreyu love 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abusei like :)
anitsirK 2008-04-08 ch 19,	abuseThat was abrupt. Hahaha...you definitely need to continue and if possible, rewrite it. I mean the concept is good enough but it still has potential! :D I mean I've read your story "Boys Typa Fun" and honestly, this story is nothing compared to it.(SORRY, please don't take offense, merely giving an opinion) Their marriage was too soon and everything was just going too fast, zoom, zoom, zoom, and you need to add depth to your characters. :D Sorry to be so critical, but it's just that you can still improve this. :D Wish you Good Luck and Happy Writing! :)
deLayed 2008-04-04 ch 5,	abuseI'm loving the Jekyll and Hyde kinda difference between these two. It's not too hammering over our heads about how different they are but it's enough to make you want to know what happens next. Also, last two lines of this story...perfect. :)
deLayed 2008-04-04 ch 3,	abuseFav line so far, "with green eyes that made her tummy do flips". Why is it that green eyes seem to get mentions in so many stories? :)
deLayed 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseLove the build up to, "At twenty-three, Lyla had no clue what to expect out of Jason Mikhail." I smiled at that knowing there was so much more to come. You've just reminded me I have my own romantic stuff resting on my hard drives.
AJS 2008-02-19 ch 18,	abuseAh, despite the rushed ending, I still think this story is cute :) I just think that the relationship between Jason & Lyla was really rushed, especially considering that Lyla had never had a boyfriend before, or even gone out on a date, so the idea that she was going to put herself out there for sex even when Jason was still with Jenny is either 1) unrealistic, or 2) proves just how crazy she really was about him. haha. You were probably aiming for #2, but really, I don't think you really messed up with this fic. It's cute and it's lighthearted, and there's nothing wrong with that a fic that doesn't have you bawling every chapter :) I like that you didn't make Lyla overly beautiful, or anything like that, but it was moreso her personality that made her so attractive, or whatever. It really IS a mystery how she stayed single for so long though - you'd think that guys would be flocking to her especially because of her outgoing personality. Oh well, Jason didn't seem to mind :p I hope to read more by you soon! I think you were suggesting some of your other stories, so maybe I'll check out some of those... -- Alyssa
NoOneInThisWorld 2008-02-13 ch 18,	abusecute story. as you know the ending was rushed but still excellent
Adorian 2008-01-14 ch 19,	abuseThat was truly amazing! I loved the characters and just the story in general. I was actually looking for just a short story to read, but I'm glad I found this one instead! I cant wait to read more of your work! P.S.- I would be honored if you would review my stuff. Alot is still in the works, but i would love to get your opinion of the one story thats finished! :)
Um..ok 2007-11-21 ch 2, anon.	abuse"She said you had asked her to call you when you had moved I and she has." You had moved in as in. Jason moved into his own apartment? Yet she has moved in to the apartment. Is Jason a she? She said you asked her to call when she moved in so she did.
StephanieWilson 2007-10-30 ch 19,	abuselove it
lonestar 2007-09-11 ch 19,	abusePlease continue your story, maybe with Lyla and Jason's wedding and please make sure that Jenny makes an appearance there as well. I love it. Short and Sweet.Your story goes to me Hall of Favourites.

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