Had to read this over a few times to get over the initial confusion, but that's fine because it was well worth it :) Interesting style, lovely poem as usual.

I like the sense of remorse/regret in this writing. *sighs* ...hmmm... but I guess I can see where people can get confused though.

But nonetheless, very good.

i love this poem. it is so grand and signifying. especially the last line. it hurts to read it, the loss

a flashback when being hit by a truck.

sorta seems to me, like

...unusual... i'm sorry but that made absolutely no sense to me. is it about your english class? or maybe it's actually really insightful and deep but i'm just too tired to understand...