it's not a trip it's a higher level of conciousness way way up in the sky with the red ballon that doesn't know it's broke.

A little odd... but it is pretty good... But, what do I know? I've never taken drugs, nor do I intend to. But, hey, I still think this is pretty good.

robots have trouble crying i do believe is off could be achieved we wouldnt either thus making us close to tears chronically.

kai

beautiful.

hey, i live in new orleans too.

I think this expresses the perfect chaotic nature for this piece. I thinkit was brilliantly written and I loved how it ended with "just turn me off"... that was just a great way to end it.

Jade

aw, this is completely too sad and wonderful. i love it, the pathos and the well executed angst. lovely!