This is possibly the best story I have ever read. My friends and I may just have to make this into a play and act it out! roflmao

You seriously must be on crack.

But I like it haha. But what about the giant otriches? Shame, shame, shame.

Good job!

Loved it, liked it!

Keep it up, will you!?!

Ha! That was friggin hilarious. I have to say, anything with "Insanity" in the title is bound to attract attention. Especially mine. Mwaha.

Anyway, well... pretty much everything was great. The tictacs were awesome... and so were the marshmallows. And with orange hair? Who would think of that? It's so cool!

LOLOLOLOL ok well that was good made me laugh and made me happy

thx

i owe it to you

got me out of me miniature depression'

\not reall

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i wasn't depressed

BUT CLOSE ENOUGH

go r&r my story (demon's cat) pleases? *big huge cute eyes appear*

whe

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST WEIRDEST STORY EVER

GR EVIL MEATLOAF

HEHEHEHEE I'M GOETTING HIGH OFF YOUR STORY

HAHAHA THIS IS SO FUNNY

lol

Firstly, I'd like to state that what caught my attention was the word "Insanity." Any title with the word "Insanity" in it will intrigue the crap out of me, so kudos to you. :P

Criticism:

"...doing then staring at marshmallows..." - it should be "than" instead of "then."

When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store and stood transfixed before the marshmallows, drool dribbling from the corners of his mouth, dripping off his chin to form a small pool at his feet. - This is a fragmented sentence. Maybe you should write this as, "When Matt accompanied his mother to the grocery store, he stood transfixed before..." - that way, the sentence is a full sentence. :)

phenomena - is plural. The "Matt Effect" is singular, so the correct word would be "phenomenon."

tictacs - are usually spelled "Tic Tacs," but *shrugs* - that's minor.

masters bidding - master's.

Matt had finished briefing his tictacs and settle back to more - major tense change.

And now, for the praise:

Mwahaha! Dude, this is hysterical! I love the great, insane obsession parts - especially when his mother is worried about him. And I like the orange Tic Tac thing, and the marshmallow with the orange hair. Basically, it's all just insane-goodness.

That's the best story I've ever read =D lmao, you're too funny

I love this story, it's great. I could never write such a wonderful story as this. The way you combined the meatloaf, bananas, singing marshmellows, washing machines, and napkins... it makes me want to cry.

That...was truly unique. And that's all I really have to say, other than COOL CHEESE!