Aren't crushes such terribly painful things at times? I think this is the first poem I've ever seen on the subject which goes beyond, "i lyke u, why dont u lyke meh?".and it's wonderful. I especially love the line, "The fear that made it [your heart] once home."

Another wonderful work, please continue your writing efforts always!

~~Starlight Rain

Also very beautiful... I'm not good at reviewing sorry, but this is great.

I can relate very well to this. This is very powerful and full of raw emotion. But if you never ask, you'll never know. Just maybe she feels the same way about you. Just maybe...good luck:)

Wow... to feel that way for someone you saw just once. Nice to see you updated. I hope school is going well for you so far!

Ta for now!
chrestomanci

Nice. It captures the emotion well.