i really like this story, please plesae please update soon.

i really like your story. it's different and it stands out. i like the fact that you have the courage to write about domestic abuse and i hope you continue with it. shane seems like he is going to be the dominant character throughout the story and jordan the comic relief. i'll keep it in my favorites and come back to see. keep writing!!

I LOVE this! Poor Bryan! This story totally rocks! I can't believe you only have 2 reviews! I adore this. This is wonderful. Please continue! I want to know what happens. ^^

-Bitter B.

This story is really good so far! You should really keep going with it, Shane seems like a really good character. Update soon!!

wow, i can't believe that no ones reviewed this yet! your doing a really great job ^_^. You've put the characters across really well, and the settings. keep it up, i wanna read more ^_^. oh, and *sniff* tis so sad ;_;