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Prieda Solo
2008-01-23
ch 4,
abuseoh. wierd bit in the middle with the biting. otherwise great stuff and this looks like its gonna get good :)
Prieda Solo
2008-01-23
ch 3,
abuseooh vampires =D
my slight dissapointment at lack of beaten-about-whiny-boy is more than fulfilled by the fact that his character is still going strong (and great) and that there are vampires.

+D luff.
Prieda Solo
2008-01-23
ch 2,
abusehm. still love it in all its wonderful anachronistic glory (heh). Merrin is turning out quite talented, less like the whiny little bratling I took him for.

Very interested to see how this will turn out =D

(btw, I write an obscene amount of reviews. Sorry in advance for flooding your inbox)
Prieda Solo
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abusefun! Yay, yay, yay for pretty spoilt boy-brats. THis story has made my day and made me forget i havn't eaten anything for ages. heh.

here's to hoping your boy doesn't grow up properly until someone knocks it into him :)
LaylaLivesLoosely
2007-10-21
ch 17,
abuseOkay, I know this story is deserted--hasn't been updated in what, three years?--but I just felt the urge to let you know that I really enjoyed reading it--great plotline, perfect romance, and a healthy dose of humor, just how I like them. Nice work on what you did write!
bluescar
2007-09-09
ch 17, anon.
abuseOkay, I know you have a revamped version of this story and others that you are working on but please finish it!
firedraygon97
2007-09-01
ch 17,
abuseAbsolutely fantastic fic. I love Merrin. The way he treats Samuel is just so fun to see. Great work with this! Please do write more soon!

~fd97
Nub in Denial
2007-06-19
ch 17,
abuseThis is such a cute story! And I love the fluffy moments between Samuel and Merrin so much!

Nice job making it suspenseful too :D!
Lady E
2007-03-19
ch 17,
abuseWhoa. There is intrigue in here for sure, rearing its head once or twice from the blend of humor, action, and yummy fluff. Somehow, I don't think this is complete, but I noticed you had a "revamped" version up, so maybe you're thinking of starting over entirely. I don't personally think this version is in any way bad, but we tend to be our own worst critics of course. At the least, I am relieved there is something of yours I can move on to. (I'm a shameless leech, I'm afraid)

Mostly, I am impressed at the flawless present tense. It's hard to write in (for most people I know, myself included) and even harder to maintain, yet I haven't caught many errors in all these chapters.

Aside from that, what else am I to say? I can confess: I may have fallen in love with your writing, and that's not even getting into your characters. You are very suited to the style of fairy tales, although "Taking These Chances" was much different and really stood out on its own.

Looking at the title now, after having read through Samuel and Merrin's daring, head-turning, and rather silly adventures, it was very well chosen.
Lady E
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseHaha. Well, one thing's for sure, I think. You have some fun ideas in your head.
EvilBunny
2006-08-16
ch 12, anon.
abuse(I like fluff. ^^;; It's a terrible thing to admit to, is it not? But it's just so cyute!)

That? That is EXACTLY what I am saying to myself RIGHT NOW.

This is a charming and engaging story. Exactly what I was hankering for. Good job!
lilylupin7
2006-08-04
ch 17,
abuseOh la la...intrigue!
Esquirella
2006-07-25
ch 4,
abuseThis is a cool story!
Haven36
2006-07-12
ch 17,
abuseGreat story! can't wait to find out what happens next.
J.L. Hastings
2006-06-14
ch 17,
abuseWow! This story is positively amazing! I've loved every word of it so far and I'm looking forward to more. NOw you'd better post soon; You've had like a two year break, it's time you got back to writing cuz I REALLY like this story and want to read more of it!
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