I LIKE IT. IT'S NOT MY FAVE OUT OF ALL UR POEMS BU IT. I LIKE THE STRUCTURE OF IT AND THE SENTIMENT BEHIND IT.

ooh ooh i really like this one! the structure is simple and although the words you used were simple you just like put them together in such an..i dunno..artistic maybe? way. it's like you've said what i felt once for me.. heh im gonna go explore more of your fine writing...
:)
*magda*

great poem!!!

very good. it flows very well. you've put into words what some of us feel.

I am not allowed to be with the one I love, so I pushed him away, when I apologized he had a new g/f, and she pushed me away, I still love him and he loves me, just it cant be. Please read some of my poems,
Amanda