|Reviews for Serpentine Power|
| b-U-b-TRUE 3/22/05 . chapter 1
I really liked this, apart from the aprt talking about how he has no arms and legs to support him, lol we already knew that! But good job, some nice descriptions!
| estrela 12/7/03 . chapter 1
o pretty! i think snakes are cool.
| Kyalia 6/10/03 . chapter 1
The 'he' & 'tree' sort of hurt the non-rhyming idea- that sounded a little trite. Otherwise, it's a goodset of comparisons- I have a soft spot for snakes.
| Aradia Madrea-Nox 11/29/02 . chapter 1
Thank you sooo much for writing a poem that is not a diss to snakes! (Sorry, I was born in the year of the snake...)
EEEEEE! Love it! Please keep writing praise for snakes... or I will... and I will ruin snakes forever, I guarantee it! Oh, well. Keep writing poetry, please!
PS.. See, I'm not as crazy as I sounded at first! ;D
| Carter Tachikawa 11/5/02 . chapter 1
Yeah, snakes are cool even they look frightening to others. Keep it up, I enjoy your
| Olusenka 9/29/02 . chapter 1
Hey I noticed how much stories poems u wrote! WAy to go ! I, myself, LOVE snakes and cats(yes i did actually read halfway through your bio) Well this poem nspired me to write a poem of my own about snakes. ummmm
the green snake...uh
crawls..? I have no poetic talent whatsoever *sighs* Ne way I live in Australia heheh so byebye _
| Pink Parka Girl 9/15/02 . chapter 1
Well, it is a cool poem..._ And snakes are so cute!