I really liked this, apart from the aprt talking about how he has no arms and legs to support him, lol we already knew that! But good job, some nice descriptions!

o pretty! i think snakes are cool.

The 'he' & 'tree' sort of hurt the non-rhyming idea- that sounded a little trite. Otherwise, it's a goodset of comparisons- I have a soft spot for snakes.

Thank you sooo much for writing a poem that is not a diss to snakes! (Sorry, I was born in the year of the snake...)

EEEEEE! Love it! Please keep writing praise for snakes... or I will... and I will ruin snakes forever, I guarantee it! Oh, well. Keep writing poetry, please!

*Kiayla*

PS.. See, I'm not as crazy as I sounded at first! ;D

Yeah, snakes are cool even they look frightening to others. Keep it up, I enjoy your

Hey I noticed how much stories poems u wrote! WAy to go ! I, myself, LOVE snakes and cats(yes i did actually read halfway through your bio) Well this poem nspired me to write a poem of my own about snakes. ummmm

the green snake...uh

crawls..? I have no poetic talent whatsoever *sighs* Ne way I live in Australia heheh so byebye _

Well, it is a cool poem..._ And snakes are so cute!