maybe you think it's not that good, but that's not true. it fits perfectly for my personality and thus is just a perfect poem! really reminds me of myself, whenever i'm angry that is.

I really like it. And you shouldn't say it isn't your best, an author cannot fairly judge their own work! :)I can relate to this piece really well. Nice job!

While you're right that it's not the best you've written, I HAVE read much worse, believe me. Just remember that people DO care and you should never shut yourself off from the world. Someone is always willing to listen! I had to learn that lesson the hard way.

Ta for now!
chrestomanci