Man I am starting to envy you here, doing things I wish I could do -- the who-dun-it is the kind of thing I could see you getting really far in.

Everything about this story, you knew your abilities but play off your limiations. Where they say you can't do it -- prove them wrong. I like this story a lot too, and would love to see this one become a novella down the road. I think you said you wanted to see something of mine make it to the bookshelves awhile back. This is the story I want you to turn into the novel or novella, because it has a lot of power behind it. You'll get up there, just stick to your guns and not follow the trends out there now. Steer clear from the trends and you will kick everyone's **.

Casey,
Hey! This story was a whole lot better, but had some spelling errors. I liked this story. Keep up the good work. I'll read more tomorrow or something. E-mail me soon, BYE!!

Rachael