wow, that was really something...i've never had the guts to tackle any of your longer pieces, but this one was really good. loved it.

Aw...that's so sad. Why'd you have to do that to her, huh? It was really good. Really, really good.

Wow. i luv how u capture the thoughts of coming into a new world. its like u were there. keep up the wonderful work.

I really like your style of writing on this one and it is very descriptive which is great!

This is very good. Hope you got an A+ on this assignment. I think I have told you this before, but you are a very talented writer

WOW,this is a sad story, but the worst part is that many people suffered teh same ill fate. :(

You are a talented writer!

:)

that is very sad...ur right :'( Very good story though! keep writing!!

I like this a lot! Gives the reader an idea of the turmoil of the time. Keep it up and thanks for the comment on The Roads in Rome.

P.S.
You're the only person who got the "Aurora" symbolism. Smarty!

Oh! This is so sad! Very true account though. Poor Fay, to have to live through the deaths of so many dear to her. This is a very nicely done diary, amazingly written.

That is so sad! Oh my word!
That was really good! I really like ur writing style. its very good. Poor Fay, first her husband then her friend, and finally her baby. That is so sad! I started crying!

Wow..., that was AMAZING. I have never read such a touching account of a journy to the new world like that. That was wonderful. I sure hope you got an A on that, or else you teacher is insane. Keep writing!

Quiet One

BTW, theres more of elvish strenght if ya want it!

One word: wow. That was really well done. And what a creative way to show a journey to America. Most of them are all sappy, "yeay! America! Wahoo!" type stories. This was totally different and I loved it! Great storyline, and very unique.

~neoli :D

Wow.
That was just..wow.
Hope you got an A.