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| MunsterInSlippers 2005-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseIts so irreversebly sad. I feel like Jhonnie Ray...crying as I read.Munster |
| PirateGrrl 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet and beautiful... Flowed so evenly |
| M L 2005-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it. |
| Ileana Eve 2004-06-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem through and through. I particularly liked the lines: "But she just laughed and her voice floated Along with the dandelion seeds we had made wishes on." |
| Knightmare Elite 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good with a dreamy feel to it. |
| Isis Reborn 2004-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI cannot begin to say how much I enjoyed reading this. The last four lines give this piece of work such a haunting ending that it has left me with chills. Everything flows so well. I can see myself lying in that grass, and almost feeling the sun's heat. Well done, I must say. :) |
| Miki Watanabe 2004-01-27 ch 1, | abuseChrist, that's gorgeous. If you keep writing poetry like this, I think I'll be in love with you. (^.^) |
| Gingaman 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is really great. I really like "She told me that she was once seven years old. And I didn't argue, because it was understood." Not sure why, it just works. Really cool. |
| Firahel Elggur 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abusethis was gorgeous. warm like vermilion smiles, it was... |
| Fae Valintine 2002-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. I perfer F/F as well. But this is a very touching story. |
| Shukusen 2002-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's so romantic, and it each line fits. |
| Believable Facade 2002-11-19 ch 1, | abusewow...great!! Romantic and sappy...just my thing!!! |
| s t e o r r a 2002-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it :) very descriptive, not like some of the generalized poems on this site about how sumone's sad, or has problems... u get wut i mean. keep writing. i suggest u enter the contest at poetry.com if u have other poems like this one :) |