amazing. an astounding, harsh, beautiful piece. rape is my deepest loathing. you created this poem perfectly. i still don't like the succession of periods, but this was fantasticly done. i love your final stanza. and:

Taking away a bondage...

For someone special that was to come

Taking away a special feeling...

Just a dirty reckless bum

you are lucky in your talent. you have a way to create rhymes in a subtle way, so i don't realize it. it's an overpowering effect. awesome job.

I had been reading so mcuh crap in this site that i felt obliiged to tell you you are awesome...

and only 13!...

Very talented.. keep it up :)

this was deep.

i love it, so sad and emotional, ugh! some of the things people do these days, really digusts me, but its a great poem, very nicely written