|Reviews for A hearts containt|
| star65 10/19/02 . chapter 1
amazing. an astounding, harsh, beautiful piece. rape is my deepest loathing. you created this poem perfectly. i still don't like the succession of periods, but this was fantasticly done. i love your final stanza. and:
Taking away a bondage...
For someone special that was to come
Taking away a special feeling...
Just a dirty reckless bum
you are lucky in your talent. you have a way to create rhymes in a subtle way, so i don't realize it. it's an overpowering effect. awesome job.
| Pam-chan 9/20/02 . chapter 1
I had been reading so mcuh crap in this site that i felt obliiged to tell you you are awesome...
and only 13!...
Very talented.. keep it up :)
| Joflower 9/19/02 . chapter 1
this was deep.
| not sure yet 9/18/02 . chapter 1
i love it, so sad and emotional, ugh! some of the things people do these days, really digusts me, but its a great poem, very nicely written