Excellent, my lovely. I likes it a lot. Usually not my type of fantasy story, but it was well written, and Destria is a character I can like.

Hey! I like it! Very cool.

dis was the bestest story ever emy, especially better than the story about me as a monkey!!! suggestions: more inappropriateness... and be more graphically when talking about violence... hee hee skippy says hi!!!!

ok, emy, this is a very good atory. It has a twisted plot. Which is a good thing. I can't guess what the end is, which is a good trait for a story to have. The story has a lot of violence, but coming from you, I can see how it fits in there. The man who called confused me, and I finally got that the man on the horse was the man who called. Anways its pretty good.

Aw man! That was great. I new you could write, but d*mn! Please, i beg you, write more. I love the way you made Destria's character develop in the story. You need a book deal, girl. Good job.
:)

A great story ^^
I'm glad I was priviledged enough to read it!

Ur stories r great, they are some of the few stories i find worth reading, the fact th the powerfulstone was the blue specled one was kinda obvious, i dun no if u meant it 2 b that way or not

Its awesome!

Alright! Great plot. Love the way you described the characters. Can't wait to read your next story!

ya its good

*evil cackle* hey AllyAllyAlly! this is MAH kinda story! The thing I don't understand is this: see, Destria isn't really the one in control, is she? Or is she? I mean, the horse-dude, he's sorta got it all worked out, right? I don't think I can say any more, it reminds me too much of my Minka story (only she gots a staff, not a rock, but hse do go evil... *cackle*)

Me favorite line: “I come in search of a rock”

I LOVES that!

First I just wanted to say Hi. Now I think it started off dry but the use of lanugage and wording was wonderful if you do continue you need too add more of a villager charcter and a bit more discrepion of the land and people add a couple of flat charters and make your main charter rounder more well dicribed and spred out the setting. Over all it was well wirtten and a intersting story I know some of my points may be weak and some wrong but it is just my way of thinking.

Excellent writing, good emotions, great and adverce adjectives- This is one good fic! One point to improve on though, is more talking.

Hey!
I think your story is pretty good actually! I like the language used-sounds very professional-like you've been doing this sort of thing for a while. Good on ya.

I really love the language you used. When I first saw the length the story, I thought it may progress too quickly, but the pace was good. Now I want to know who the guy on the horse was. Is he good or bad?? Heh. Anyway, great story, good characters, great overall ^-^