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Beth
2004-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is so full of beauty it's very existence gives off an aura of love. She must be the luckiest girl in the world.
weelilwolf
2002-10-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseI probably shouldn't laugh at this, because I assume laughter wasn't the tone you were looking for. But i absolutly love the last 4 lines of this poem, and the care-free nature of them makes me smile, because it's a perfect reflection of me at times...can i make a pretty picture with them?? i sware, they are so great!!

by the way, i'm really sorry if this isn't what you wanted to hear...*apologizes for lack of understanding*
hudsiyfiusnfsudi
2002-10-21
ch 1,
abusea queston. if humans go blind by love why fall in love?
Kanoi
2002-09-24
ch 1,
abusebeautiful, as usual.
Kaba-san
2002-09-22
ch 1,
abuseTouching, to say the least. Well done.
Rini
2002-09-20
ch 1,
abuseOnce again this sounds so much like myself. Odd how one believes they are the only ones out there with how they feel, yet others feel the same. Ack.. I wont start to ramble here. Anyway, awesome poem. Keep it up, hope to see more soon.
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