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| Beth 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so full of beauty it's very existence gives off an aura of love. She must be the luckiest girl in the world. |
| weelilwolf 2002-10-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI probably shouldn't laugh at this, because I assume laughter wasn't the tone you were looking for. But i absolutly love the last 4 lines of this poem, and the care-free nature of them makes me smile, because it's a perfect reflection of me at times...can i make a pretty picture with them?? i sware, they are so great!! by the way, i'm really sorry if this isn't what you wanted to hear...*apologizes for lack of understanding* |
| hudsiyfiusnfsudi 2002-10-21 ch 1, | abusea queston. if humans go blind by love why fall in love? |
| Kanoi 2002-09-24 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, as usual. |
| Kaba-san 2002-09-22 ch 1, | abuseTouching, to say the least. Well done. |
| Rini 2002-09-20 ch 1, | abuseOnce again this sounds so much like myself. Odd how one believes they are the only ones out there with how they feel, yet others feel the same. Ack.. I wont start to ramble here. Anyway, awesome poem. Keep it up, hope to see more soon. |