Very interesting. Rather short though :'( Im'a check out the sequal :D

that was so sad. this story's great!

this is the best 1st person pov i've read so far. it's very touching. i like.

Wow... wonderful story. I love your writing, it makes everything seem more realistic.

That is soo sad. It is some briliant writing though!
Wolfe

I've read all your 'General Fiction' stories and I love every single on of them! I'm Arien's friend - Laura who wanted you to carry on with 'When Words Could Only Condemn Me' ^_^

*stares at the screen* that's so sad...:( Past experience tells me that I agree...unrequited love is the worst feeling in the world...
#Arien#

Oh man, this story made me sad. I love your writing, you captured each emotional beautifully. Great job