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Reviews For: Nulyrtumbhurdlesquitlywag
balloonfuzz 2003-02-17 . chapter 1
I like it, but it could use an easyer flow( its hard to read)
2002-09-19 . chapter 1
nice one
Kewl_Guy 2002-09-18 . chapter 1
ya um...kinda odd, but nice rhyming. Next time though, make it a tad less confusing
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