this seems to me a stark commentary on the futility of life in the face of death. I feel somewhat ignorant for not knowing who it's about. Once again, though, amazing work. I can't find anything to criticize.

my god, this is good. your poetry is so complex-and that's not a bad thing; i just mean that it means more

Beautiful. I am surprized to find so much poetry in concentration on this website! Ive seen only 3 now, and it is delightful.

I am a Russian, and I suppose that we may be stubborn, in the context of the poem, yes.

I live in Montana though, of all the names, Green Village, very very small.

Raman Andreyevich Chechkov

This is a twisted piece... I love it but it is bizarre! LOL. Poetic justice.

Jade