Reviews for Broken Mind of a Soldier

ArhraCole 2003-02-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, there's alot of really powerfull imagery in that one. 'Course that's what would be expected from a poem about a soldier on the front in WW1. From the stroies my grandfather told me, what you've decribed in that was pretty much accurate. Though, you left out the sheet terror that was gained from seeing a night raid by german troops with flame throwers. You've gotta love man kind's arm's race. Oh well. Very cool, if not disturbingly vivid writnig here.
2002-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseOne word PARAGRAPHS
SotMoon 2002-09-20 ch 1,	abuseAye... I like this. Very discriptive. Keep up the good work.