That was brilliant! Maybe a bit on the depressing side, but v. sensitive, I have to admit! I don't usually like poetry, on the whole, but this was very good! I'll go and read the other one now, shall I?

hey, this was a really good poem, I feel like that a lot too! I would just love to have someone to listen to me. If you ever need help, just e-mail me, okay?
Heather
P.S. Read my new poem