Aw! That was really beautiful! i liked it. It expressed so much emotion and you could almost feel the characters pain through their words. It was very touching and well written! Hehe. i finally came to review your stuff. I plan on reading your fanfic too but i wanted to check out your poems and stuff first *oh*

wonderful. unfortunately im not good at reading songs because i cant get a tune that suits them into my head *woe on me!* but other than that i loved it. very thoughtful and very touching

Guardian, this is beautiful. It has such a palpable sadness about it. Please write some more poetry soon - cause if this is an example of what you can do, I'd love to see more!

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i no ive told u this already but i luv this poem soooooooooooooooooo much! its really really movin! so sad! & ur rite, it duz sum up A & M's situ (it is them u thinkin of, rite?)
speak 2 u soon
luvs blaise xXxXx

Very nice Moj! I luv it! Almost made me cry, i don't think it needs adjustment, it's just perfect!

x_Chrissie_x

Sniff! That was so cuute! But I'm not going to cry... I'm not a softie! It's my soft side that's speaking! So keep it up! And I'm sorry about the person you wrote about!

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that WAS sad! which i guess means gud job, rite? this is ur 1st song? have u done poetry? this seems closer 2 a poem than a song 2 me, but poems can b songs & songs can b poems so there u go... v. beautiful! & perfect cuz im in a sad mood. well, my computers bein messed up & my emails, both of them, rnt workin v. well. ok, so thats not horrible, but my boy friend broke up w/ me cuz this ** kissed me in front of him, & my boy friend thoght that i wanted 2 kiss the **! so sad! ok... im gonna go now & read sum humor.... or humour as u crazy brits wud say! ^_~

Sweet, very sweet.

I just had to say that that was a very beautiful peice. It nearly brought me to tears! Great Job!

hmm, i like the sentiment this brings but i obviously can't think of the tune to this so i'm not entirely sure how to talk about this right now. Ok how bout...it wouldn't kill you to get a few rhyming couplets in there, even if its just one, cause it tends to give a certain rhythm to your piece, cause at the moment its hard to find one so it seems its just being read kind of monotoneous (i wonder if i spelt that right?)
Ne wayz apart from that, its a good piece of work so keep it up.