   Sam Munch 2003-08-21 . chapter 1kida chessy... but still is pretty good. |
 Clarinet Elf Chick 2003-02-24 . chapter 1Great job on this!The first line really gave this strong feeling of independence (sorry for going all wacko on you but it's true), and that's really good. Yup.
-Ayla |
 BeryllaBaggins 2003-01-19 . chapter 1your an awsome writer
[did I spell awsome right?] |
 2003-01-05 . chapter 1 very cool |
| Black Aura-Sama, the laziest person in the world who wont sign in 2002-09-29 . chapter 1 ^^ I just LOVE all yor poetry! This one especially! Meaningful and opinionated! It's true, we all can change the world! |
 jaded-angel2 2002-09-20 . chapter 1wow that was great it was sweet but meaningful keep up the good work |
 Joflower 2002-09-20 . chapter 1me like. tis true and very deep |
| nicole 2002-09-20 . chapter 1 hey that was good!!! |
 Angelicpixie 2002-09-20 . chapter 1Wow I really liked the message you talked about how you where and how everyone can change the world. You changed the "What ifs" to the "I will"
You make the poem have power. Inspiraton is yours that you are creating right now. Good work. |
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