Well it depend if the told you that to protect you pr if they had stopped when they told you, now wouldn't. Anyway i like it.

so very very true. this hits home in some ways... ouch.. well, keep em coming...

Ta!

Oooooooooh I like it! The only part that I don't really like is the second line. I dunno, the word thug just sounds a little weeiirrdd. But other than that, kewl! I love the last line. You're really good at writing last lines. OH btw, I removed that scribew story because I just realized that it SUCKS. Anyway, BYE!