|Reviews for Darkness|
| Butterfly Radcliffe 4/15/04 . chapter 1
I'm afraid of the dark too. So at least you're not alone...
Faith, Hope and Love
| Eleena Thea 11/30/03 . chapter 1
Um, I love the word chioce but I do want to poiunt something out to you as well. It is a beautiful poem but you change the focus or tone or something. If I am understanding the peom correctly you start off as in you yourself is engulfed in this night spirit if you will. But then, you start adressing the darkness itself. I am not sure that neccisarily flows. You need to maybe rework the begaining a bit to communicate with the dark metaphor from line one.
| Cyanotok 8/11/03 . chapter 1
You know, this could be erotic if not for the fear factor. Or, maybe it could be erotic because of that.
| touchless 1/5/03 . chapter 1
I know just how you feel, I have to go out every night by myself. more than an inconvienence.
| Chibiheartdragon 12/23/02 . chapter 1
Ooh...*shivers* I hate the dark too. It freaks me out, really. I also hate being along for too long. Freaks me out also.
This was one of your best poems, I have to admit. .
Season's Greetings! Peace of Earth! Merry Christmas! Feliz Navidad!
-Chibiheartdragon who giggles insanely after saying "Feliz Navidad", since it's not in her lang.
| Troubled Mind 12/15/02 . chapter 1
ooh, very scary, i could feel the tingling in my spine... I'm scared of the dark too! *shudders*
ps- thanks for the review. :)
| Moonwinges 12/15/02 . chapter 1
Nice poem, and it has some beautiful imagery. What form is it in though? Just free-style?
| Namir Swiftpaw 11/5/02 . chapter 1
Gamaja...this is the only way I can contact you, so I am going to just have to hope that you come back and read this sometime.
You say that you are part wolf in a human world, and that I wouldn't understand. Didn't you even read my profile? You might be part wolf, but I am part CAT. I know, and can relate. So don't assume you know things about me that you don't.
Thanks for the reviews, everyone, and sorry I have to put this here. There's no other way I can contact you.
| GAMAJA 11/4/02 . chapter 1
WHAT DO U MEAN U DON'T LIKE AMERICA? U LIVE HERE AND U HATE IT? I AM PROUD TO BE AN AMERICAN!
*sighs*okay, now that is out of my system! Don't feel out of place. You aren't "part wolf" in a human world! I am. Great poem!
| Catgirl Rahen 10/26/02 . chapter 1
I definitely feel your pain here. I have almost no clue why I am afraid of the dark. I feel so childish. Oh well, what can ya do...:)
| Random Tokin' White Dude 10/14/02 . chapter 1
Being afraid of the dark isn't lame,almost everyones afraid of it,oh and great poem
| Toad-Frog 10/4/02 . chapter 1
Darkness use to scare the heck out of me when I was a kid even if I had to go to a neighbors house a stone throw away! Great piece! Keep writing!
| Cunning Coyote 10/1/02 . chapter 1
*shudders* when I was a kid I hated the dark..and I still do. I still sleep with the lights on *glances around nevously* What are YOU looking at? *hides*
| obsidian katana 9/24/02 . chapter 1
great poem! i like it!