I'm afraid of the dark too. So at least you're not alone...
Faith, Hope and Love

Um, I love the word chioce but I do want to poiunt something out to you as well. It is a beautiful poem but you change the focus or tone or something. If I am understanding the peom correctly you start off as in you yourself is engulfed in this night spirit if you will. But then, you start adressing the darkness itself. I am not sure that neccisarily flows. You need to maybe rework the begaining a bit to communicate with the dark metaphor from line one.

You know, this could be erotic if not for the fear factor. Or, maybe it could be erotic because of that.

I know just how you feel, I have to go out every night by myself. more than an inconvienence.

Ooh...*shivers* I hate the dark too. It freaks me out, really. I also hate being along for too long. Freaks me out also.

This was one of your best poems, I have to admit. .

Season's Greetings! Peace of Earth! Merry Christmas! Feliz Navidad!

-Chibiheartdragon who giggles insanely after saying "Feliz Navidad", since it's not in her lang.

ooh, very scary, i could feel the tingling in my spine... I'm scared of the dark too! *shudders*

hehee...

ps- thanks for the review. :)

Nice poem, and it has some beautiful imagery. What form is it in though? Just free-style?

Gamaja...this is the only way I can contact you, so I am going to just have to hope that you come back and read this sometime.

You say that you are part wolf in a human world, and that I wouldn't understand. Didn't you even read my profile? You might be part wolf, but I am part CAT. I know, and can relate. So don't assume you know things about me that you don't.

Thanks for the reviews, everyone, and sorry I have to put this here. There's no other way I can contact you.

Namir Swiftpaw

WHAT DO U MEAN U DON'T LIKE AMERICA? U LIVE HERE AND U HATE IT? I AM PROUD TO BE AN AMERICAN!

*sighs*okay, now that is out of my system! Don't feel out of place. You aren't "part wolf" in a human world! I am. Great poem!

I definitely feel your pain here. I have almost no clue why I am afraid of the dark. I feel so childish. Oh well, what can ya do...:)

Catgirl Ishida

Being afraid of the dark isn't lame,almost everyones afraid of it,oh and great poem

Darkness use to scare the heck out of me when I was a kid even if I had to go to a neighbors house a stone throw away! Great piece! Keep writing!

*shudders* when I was a kid I hated the dark..and I still do. I still sleep with the lights on *glances around nevously* What are YOU looking at? *hides*

great poem! i like it!