That was beautiful. I loved the poem and the whole idea behind of it her not being Cinderella. Good job.

Kool poem......me like!!!
LaterDayz!!!

Very different way to write Cinderella, heh. I ilke it though. Nice job

-Jessie

Wow! This poem has a great message. I know a bunch of girls who need to read this . . ..

~Elsie~

nice poem, not really sad but it really gives u a strong feeling.

Interesting twist. A great concept, and though bitter, also sweet.