First, being goth is NOT about being depressed and writing really cheesy poetry about suicide or cutting..(that sounds way too emo for me) or about wearing black. And you can't just BECOME goth. You are or you aren't.

So you like being a poser? Jeeze you can't just wake up one morning and say "Hmm I think i'll pretend to be goth cause I'm a ** idiot!" Posers like make me so ** mad. Don't apoligize I'm emmbarassed for both of us.

You sound like a mini or a mesonite to me. DOn't try too hard...be yourself. I'm a hard goth, btw. The penname confuses everyone. -sigh-

You people make me laugh! You're not goth. You're some freak who wears white make-up and dreams of being a vampire. I hate it how everyone thinks that wearing black makes them goth! Do you listen to gothic music? And no, I don't mean Marilyn Manson. I mean the 80's bands that everyone else thinks are weird. Do you shop at Hot Topic? Only the stupid teeny goths do that. You may think you're goth but, OMG you are NOT! Don't even got me started on goth poetry! It's just a ton of dark words with a lot of spelling errors. It's not goth at all! You don't know what you're talking about. Idiot. Thanks though, this poem gave me a good laugh!

this rules - it rings true!

Cool! i like it! No way was it insulting to anyone thats goth. (or at least i dont take it offencively) neat! keep writing!

It was really spiffy..tho you shoulda put it poe style....you know line between each line and **.... Well I gota blow this ppsycle stand....I liked it!

Well...I like the idea...but...I don't really like the poem. I mean, I have absolutely nothing against Goths (actually, some of my beloved family members are Goths), but...Just because your a Goth, does it mean you have to just write poems about being depressed and darkness and "black raven birds"? I can get the dress part of it, with all black and everything...but...I dunno...

Heys.. I like this. Nice one ^_^ Hmm, I really like it...

Interesting...Are you?