In this chapter, you say Brooke is wearing flipflops, but last chapter, she bent to tie her shoe when Bobby groped her. Might want to fix that detail.

love this! i am so excited! i can not process any sentences i am so excited! EEK! can't wait till the next cahpter!

I really like this story to bad its not finished yet. Never really cared for Sy it was obvious why they broke up even before the truth came out.

omg...i miss Sy tho...i luved him...too bad about that...bt james and brooke are really cute...i luv this story...ur a really good author...byes!

i do lovee brookie.
gurls who dont give a ** bout what anyone says bout them,
and calls out anyone who has the audacity to touch their ** is fine by me! amd little Jamesiess sounds HOTT!;)

lovin' it!
-Josephinee

love it.
i feel so bad for poor brooke!

I luv!1 ur story! it was awesome! i fishes it in a whole day!

Hey hey. Nice story. Sypher is such a cool name. First time i've heard it. Did you come up with that yourself or do you actually know someone called Sypher?

I've alternated quite a couple of times but now i'm pretty sure i'm rooting for James all the way.

Oh, and take your time updating. Putting up a chapter for the sake of it sucks the fun out of it. ^_*

yayayayayay brooke and james are together! FINALLY! i was just waiting for it to happen!! and i luv the way B reacted to the bullying, esp the shower incident and all!! shes got my respect at least...if shes a bit slutty...ok not exactly since fanon is only the 2nd guy shes evr slept with, but still
uhh and also the sy bizness.. i cant believe u let brooke and him get back together again, after he cheated the first tym, with The Evil One and all. and then hes in LUV with her??
if u let fanon succumb to The Evil One... Sy was cute enough, except for the cheating thing and falling in luv with her evil sis thing. hmph.
and the bizness abt her sis being so out to get her is ...not credible. work it out will u??
then u hav some grammar and spelling mistakes. i know sum are purposely spelled wrong, but sum is just not. dont get me wrong, ur writing is good, but even the best make unseen mistakes
this is a part in chap 29: ladies' night;
"“It ain’t your fault,” Sy cut in, just as she was working to the point where she could have twisted everything to blame herself."
is it supposed to be sy or ty?? i was kinda real confoozed =P pls see to it!!
and what was hugh talking about about the reason why he and james dont like each other in the same chap?? is it about a grl? oh complications!! ayayayayay i jst luv the lil twists that make ur plot so original!! wen u puttin up a new chappie anywayy?? im dying to know what happens?? can she hav another fight?? it was so funny!! and wers the bball?? is the season over or something? and abt character description?? im confused abt their looks and i cant visualize nicely...
ok thats enough "constructive criticism"...go write me a new chappie! and dont lose ur flash drive again? u found it? and get a good antivirus! dont let itty bitty compy germies get u down and not let us get our dose of merrin and fanon! =D sorry for making u read all this! go write!!
x U ROCK x

i really like this story...
seems that they like each other but they are just denying it to themselves...
pls update soon cause i'd really like to know how this story turns out...thanks.. :)

Nice story you got here. I've only started reading and I'm on chapter 4 so you'll be seeing a lot more of me lol. So far so good =)

keep it going! update!!
dont take two months...or longer!

i read the 33 chapters in one day. typos and grammatical errors crop up from time to time but who am i to complain? i'm not perfect either. judging from the date you started posting this story, you don't post that often. hope you get to update faster.
when brooke asked james if he has ever been in love and he said yes, he meant skylar, right?

Good chapter with James's parents forbidden anymore sleepovers with Brooke, it looks like they're starting to catch on that they have feelings for each other.

I love you. Can I say that without sounding too fan-girly? Anyway, there was a long while where I thought James and Brooke were only going to be friends, and nothing else (not even leaning a little in that direction, yada), but that would be a shame, because they have great chemistry. Oh, and it's also a testament to your writing that you almost, and I mean really, nearly almost swayed me in the S&B direction.
 
I sincerely hope you keep this updating streak up, even if it's for purely selfish reasons. ;)