Luv it!! I like the idea of being invinsible for an hour! That last verse was one of the most amazing endings I've ever seen in poetry!! You're very talented.

For some reason, the only poem I bothered to post here was one of the worst poems I ever wrote. I'm still trying to figure out why I did it.

D'you ever wonder why poetry is almost never reviewed on fanfiction?? I felt like reading a poem and your summary caught my eye, so I read it, but almost NONE of the poetry online has more that five or six reviews.

Anyway...(I ramble a lot, don't I?)

~Akane Thief~

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