Oh, this almost made me cry... if it were longer I would have. It's a nicely depressing poem. Thank you for writing it!

wow. very sad though! like the 3rd stanza, very cool. great poem!

Its so sad! I still love it tho! I love all ur poems they are so well thought out and have meaning behind them

It's so sad! But I like it anyway, it has a lot of fealing to it, I can just imagine being left behind like that. Thankyou for reviewing all of my work. It means the world to me!( not many people read my stuff) I am a complete fan of all your work and it's so nice to get your reviews.

Wow. That's about all I can think to say: wow. You've got some pretty forceful stuff here! Way to go, Luinthoron. :D

Ta for now!
chrestomanci