Nicely written! I really liked this! Keep writing! _

I liked that, especially the ending. A bit creepy, but it was beautiful anyway.

this is GORGEOUS!i love this to insanely large proportions!

O lifeless love, o loveless lie,

Roll in your grave and let me die

next to you, forever I

Our love eternal damned.

that was the best ever!PUBLISH PUBLISH PUBLISH!and when you do, can I have a signed copy?*grins*i swear i won't sell it on ebay. btw, your review made me CRACK !*hugs*ur a legend.

I said in a previous review that I don't go for love poems, and this is no exception. I do, however, believe that other poetry from you would be the work of a true genius.