Pretty cool, but I think there's an accidental rhyme in there and it broke my concentration.... or maybe that was my friend saying "I'm back with my boyfriend"... point being, water is good.

I see. Interesting way to introduce yourself.. yourself meaning your written self...

You have a definate sense of river-ness. I would, based on the psychoclasses i jhave had , sigest includong more decription and less gnereal termyness.

Strange....very strange...
But then a lot of people go for that in poetry

How can you possess such a gift to write this well, I mean it, as well as your plot lines being unique thus individule, youu seem to push some of your own feelings into the pressure its giving off, what made you come up with the idea of these, they are really neat

This is an amazing collection of poems. I am glad that you are posting again because it has been a while since I last read anything from you. Anyway, wonderful work!

Jade