Ooh, pretty. I like it :) It has this feeling of umbrageous majesty. Nifty.

In the interest of criticism, I have a bit of an issue with the third line of the second stanza: it feels overpacked. But the next line more than makes up for it. Powerful stuff.

Anyway, good job, and keep it up.

tbm

oh, dark... I like it.

beautiful imagery that coincides with the emotion. dreamy-like, reminds me of etherial ringlets.

Starts warm and sweet- catches interest.
Lovely extended metaphor and imagery.
Then quickly spirals into anger.
Then back to beauty and wonderment which again ends in anger (which has a powerful side-message) Great 2nd stanza.
Haunting and dark last stanza, completing the image and leaving you strangely calmer.

thats a wonderful poem! it grabbed me so much...i get a rush of different emotions from it and interpertations!