Again, you captured the essence of the prose style in this poem. Wonderful, wonderful!

dont do it marlena, dont do it!

good poem, bad poem bad poem

acht! staining such a word as love or beauty, stain i tell you ! stain !

even worse imagining a concept

dont do it!

heh

heh

may I have a voice too? Although brilliantly constructed dear, most brilliant.

kai

oh, another movie i have to see now!

if it's as wonderful as you're describing it. lovely poem 'the corpse of my lover', wonderful repition, really. even without me seeing the movie this poem is breathless and amazing.

talk to you soon,

marlena