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| The Lady of Shallott 2002-11-03 ch 1,  | abuse_Very_ vivid images. So moving - beautiful and thoughtful. Only one typo - ocean. Lovely writing. |
| Lady-Of-the-Moon1 2002-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading that, I have to say, you are a very good writer. |
| Lli 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseChilly. Good imagery, really creates pictures in my head. One thing though, yes, I'm sorry, I'm being picky, you forgot the 'n' on 'ocean' Absolutetly lovely. ~Lli |
| Morbane 2002-10-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, very sad. Well sustained structure. I think you mean 'consolation', not 'console'? Nice how you build up the tension, and increase the importance of all the things that are rejecting you, towards the end. Some King Lear quotes come to mind. |
| The Blood and Gore 2002-10-02 ch 1, | abuseYour begining to make more sense Muse... |
| XxXidiosyncraticXxX 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuse*sniffles* This story is so sad but still really beautiful. |