Very cute story. I love it. It's definatly going on my favs! The relationship betwen Rhy and Mick is just too sweet. Keep up the excellent work.

Chobi

*claps* Really that was simply beautiful. Capturing every emotion. Wonderful, truly!

Wonderful job!

I love the starting line. It was the sort of line that makes me want to read more. So I did, and the more I read, the more I loved it. It's brilliant. One gets vivid, pretty images of Rhy, and without having it laid out in so many words.
That was brilliant. I mean it. _
'"You know what you remind me of, Mick?" she had asked, her head on my chest after we had consummated our attraction in the most poetic backseat of her navy Jeep Grand Cherokee.' - this made me grin.
And this - '...and she would accept that and not make me be fixed her way.' - made me smile and feel all warm inside.
Keep writing.

That was simply beautiful. You truly have a way with words.

Aw...

Congrats. You've made me go all wibbly.

That was wonderful... I think this is my fav. one shot so far... Very good

Dear lord that was beautiful, just beautiful.*wipes eyes*

nice, very well done, are you going to write more to it? b/c it is very good good luck with all ur stories