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| Shining Moonlight1 2003-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseI like the personification of the Gods and angry beasts and such. The end was excellent, "The fight was ended-light had won." The end of a storm always seems like the aftermath of a battle for me, too, great simile. Thanks for reviewing my work! Keep writing, mate. ~Kelly~ |
| Ellerfru 2002-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI like this one :) Nice rhythm! |
| The Lady of Shallott 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseYou really have a way with words. I'm looking forward to reading your published novels when the time comes! ^_~ |
| XxXidiosyncraticXxX 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the classical style... it reminds me of a poet, I just can't remember who. Still, brilliant. |