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| Tainted Muse 2003-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseVery well worded, your word choice adds emphasis and drama to the poem. Great job, I love the work, also, thanks for reviewing my poem...ff.net messed up all the stanzas in it though...any advice on how to fix it? |
| The Lady of Shallott 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, that hits close to home. So true - you've captured the reality very well. |
| Kenske 2002-10-21 ch 1, | abuseI love the moral in this story! And how you keep up the pattern is very nice! My only complaint is that in the first stanza the rhyming style is different then the rest (It's ABCB while the rest are ABCC). But none the less, this poem tells it how it should be! Great job! |
| The Blood and Gore 2002-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this its true that others don't help their brothers and sisters like they used too but I can say by what you've read of mine that I cling to that more then I do to reality.... |
| XxXidiosyncraticXxX 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is so true. |
| Jau-Peacecraft 2002-09-26 ch 1, | abuseSomething that makes you think and hope that you've done the right things in the past. Very good and meaningful! I'll read more of your material. Pz out ^_^ P.s. I read this when i was listening to Ayumi hamasaki - duty, and I kinda think it fits with the poem..i dunno lol, check it out if your bored one day. |
| Needa S 2002-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI love the ending. Good piece and your words flowed. Keep writing! |
| Fluffums 2002-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is well written and true. YOu make so much sense to me. I enjoy this poem a lot, especially the lina about the pedestal. You are a talented writer indeed! If you'd take a look at some of my work I'd be very grateful! Thanks! |