oh man, thats so awesome. oh man! and, and, melville. acht. look:

a gold of conversations the older rhymes blinking

back the nova of

superceding the chain crosses-

genious. and, the lines, they are alternating between builded furling power of words, and then abate into simple conciseness, altogether that hits the on the mind like a strong blow. you write like a good fighter

lorraine

oh melville and docks. Melville is like madness, to read, its madnss! Oh melville and docks and beards. madness!

kai

good stuff. not the most popular topic to work with :). nice choice of words.