|Reviews for Melville on the Dock|
| Aviendha19 10/16/02 . chapter 1
oh man, thats so awesome. oh man! and, and, melville. acht. look:
a gold of conversations the older rhymes blinking
back the nova of
superceding the chain crosses-
genious. and, the lines, they are alternating between builded furling power of words, and then abate into simple conciseness, altogether that hits the on the mind like a strong blow. you write like a good fighter
| unexpected source 10/11/02 . chapter 1
oh melville and docks. Melville is like madness, to read, its madnss! Oh melville and docks and beards. madness!
| understated 9/25/02 . chapter 1
good stuff. not the most popular topic to work with :). nice choice of words.