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| Tsukino Ashiko 2003-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliant! Bloody brilliant! What a cute poem...nice flow and language. I applaud! |
| Moonwinges 2003-03-06 ch 1, | abuseLOL, so true, so true. I love the imagery in this poem. You chose a really hard rhyme pattern but you did a really great job with it. The rhymes defiently help this poem flow and are part of what makes it beautiful. |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2003-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThat's really cute. I like it you have very nice descriptions. However I believe that Dream of the Endless controls our dreams and my friends think me to be the slightest bit insane because he is a fictional character. Anyway...you probably think the same thing so I will go now. Good job. |
| chouchou 2002-12-25 ch 1, | abusepretty, pretty, pretty! Thanx for reviewing my poem. You were my first reivewer! ::huggles:: Ya, about the punctuation and everything...^^ My format's really messed up though. lol Really pretty poetry! P.S. Merry X-mas! |
| Ellerfru 2002-12-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! In Germany, some people believe in fairies who bring nightmares. These ghosts are called "Mahrfru" or "Mahrte". Yours is just the opposite... I like the idea of a fairy bringing good dreams. Good poem! |
| placid wind 2002-12-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is really pretty! I really like faries, and a dream fairy sounds nice! It's very well put, and rymed (spell? I'm tired...) nicely. I like!!! |
| The Lady of Shallott 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseJust what I've dreamed about. Wonderfully captured. |
| Lli 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAww, It's beautifully cute:) and very sweet |
| unrestrainedmelodies 2002-10-20 ch 1, | abuseso pretty. *starts to sketch dream fairies everywhere* sounds like something either myself or my friend anna would write. Fairies rock! Keep the dreams alive! ~Sarah~ *elvengoddess* ^the keeper of dreams^ |
| Faith McKay 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuseVery cute, I enjoyed this one because I love to dream :) Much Luv ~*~Faith~*~ |
| XxXidiosyncraticXxX 2002-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is absolutely adorable. It's simple and really,really cool. *wants to make a children's book with it* ^_^ |
| Cornish Friggin' Pixie 2002-09-25 ch 1, | abuseOoooh. I like. --JPBP |